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March 11, 2014


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OBJECT: THANK YOU FOR SUBMISSION AND REQUEST FOR REVISION
Dear [CONTACT NAME],

The speech that you submitted to me for the presentation at [DESCRIBE] is excellent with one minor exception.

Inasmuch as [NAME] is somewhat sensitive about [DESCRIBE], I feel that it would be best not to reference this subject. I would appreciate it if you would delete those sections in Paragraphs [NUMBER] and [NUMBER] which specifically comment about [DESCRIBE], and find a suitable substitution.

Once again, the speech is very well written. Thank you.


Sincerely,




[YOUR NAME]
[YOUR TITLE]
[YOUR PHONE NUMBER]
[YOUREMAIL@YOURCOMPANY.COM] 




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